求去英国留学的两份英文推荐信和一封自推信

HI,我是今年申请英国大学的。。从a-level申请大学。。这是我报大学的类似自荐信的文章。。绝对没有语病。。请老师改了好几遍。你只要把其中几个单词稍作修改应该就可以了。。这份可以适用任何大学

After completing my A-level studies, I know that I want to study mathematics at a higher level; I would like to explore the link between mathematics and financial behaviour (Economics, Business, Management)

Mathematics is a subject I became fascinated with in my college. It had intrigued me because I always get great pleasure from solving difficult mathematical problems. My A-level studies have provided me with a strong introduction. I now seek a greater academic focus and more extensive research opportunities by taking a university degree in mathematics.

As my studies have developed. I have realized that mathematics is the foundation of every science, we can use mathematics to solve many problems. I started to touch maths very early, when other children focus on toys I started to do some simple maths. One thing i remember clearly is when I was in Year 4, my teacher left my class a Year 10 level question as a challenge. I spent a few hours attempting to do it, but was still stuck on some stages. I never gave up. I tried to ask my mother for help, and after I got some tips from her, I totally understood this question, and solved it immediately. This experience made me more ambitious to learn more about mathematics, and was a catalyst for me to join the Maths Club in my City. In this club we got the best teachers. They did not just teach us how to pass the exams, but helped us to think about questions logically. Having acquired this habit, when I attempt a question I always try to find a logical way to explain it. After 2 years concentrated study in mathematics I represented my City in the national competitions for mathematics and I got into the third round. My parents always attach importance to my maths result. They sent me to a mathematics summer school every year, and I liked them because this led me to be the top math student in my school.

Outside Sixth Form, sport is my favourite activity, especially basketball. I like to play it with the local people, because I can practice my speaking skills by talking to them, and I was an active member of the basketball team. This further helped me to develop my interpersonal skills and leadership qualities. Each week, I spent most of my spare time participating. Also I can play the keyboard, and have a Level 4 certificate. During my double maths studies, the balancing act will prove extremely useful as I seriously dedicate myself to my academic study while also maintaining time for my hobbies and relationships.

Two years ago I got the opportunity to continue my studies in this country. It has been a fantastic experience for me; to study in England is a dream for lots of students and I have loved every minute of it. The people, the culture and the environment all sparked my interest in every day living in England.

My personal characteristics of hard work, dedication and commitment make me ideally suited to mathematics. I am extremely eager to learn and discover more about the world of mathematics. Beyond that my ideal vocation would be in the field of actuary. I know this will take a long time, and mathematics is the vital thing to reach the goal.

No matter where I study, I will pursue a rigorous mathematics course. However, I want to immerse myself in a cross-cultural experience in a place that fascinates me, based on my experiences, I know England is the place.

应该有帮助吧。。呵呵

就在这里给你贴吧
推荐信：
比较短，你可以自己再加点具体事例，这样才有血有肉，不空洞。好运！！
Mr.xxxx, presently a software testing engineer at our company, has displayed a great deal of efficiency as well as understanding on regular hand duty.
Owing to his intelligence and dilligence, he advanced swiftly in our company and got admirations from both his staff and colleagues. He always paid great attention to his work and under any circumstances he showed his perseverance,and honesty. I thus believe ha has the capability to carry on his graduate studies at your university academically and emotionally successful.
If there were any more information regarding Mr.xxx's background or his work record asked, I would like to help your university to acquire it. Please contact with me without hesitation.

自推信：
自荐信要脱颖而出
一份好的自荐信应该包括以下八个方面的必要内容：
教育背景。你的大学专业是什么，你为何选择这个专业，多年来的专业学习学到了什么，与你选择工商管理研究有什么关系。
工作经历。你曾经担任过什么样的职务，这几年来的工作中有什么业绩、学到了什么，与你攻读MBA有什么关系。
社会活动组织能力。在大学期间曾经参与或组织过什么活动，曾担任什么样的工作，从中又学到了什么。
最满意的一次经历。最满意的一项工作或学习经历是什么，是怎样做好它的。
最突出的才能。你认为自己最突出的方面是什么，如领导能力、组织能力、交流沟通能力或是协调能力。
学习计划和目的。你在攻读MBA期间的学习计划是什么，攻读MBA与你的职业追求、职业目标又有什么关联。
奖励。你曾经受过何种奖励，你是否担任过助教，你是否有优秀的论文曾经得到发表或受到奖励。
特长爱好。你其他需要向商学院说明或解释的，如你的特长和爱好，或者你在某一方面，如学习成绩不够理想，需要向商学院解释的。
同时，如果你不想让你的自荐信埋没在数百名甚至数千名申请者的资料堆中的话，还要特别注意以下四点提示：
不要忽视东西方文化的差异。中国人一向视“谦虚”为美德，即使取得了不错的成绩也要学会有所保留，而西方人不仅追求“优越”而且还要善于表达出来，所以申请者在写自荐信时一定要把自己的长处毫不隐瞒地描述出来，使人一眼就能知道你优秀的方面。
要富有个性。虽然很多申请留学MBA的人都有大致相同的经历，但实际上他们还是有很多区别的，如生活背景、学习和工作成绩、所掌握的技巧等，申请者应力求在自荐信中突出自己在某方面与众不同的成绩、能力和优点。避免给人以“千篇一律”、“平平庸庸”的感觉。
要真实。美国人对一个人的诚实品质看得很重。例如在签证时，你什么“失误”都可以，惟一不能做的就是对签证官撒谎，如果你是因为撒谎而被拒签的话，那么再签成功率将会很低。因为撒谎是人格问题。也正因为如此，美国人觉得个人签字比盖章更有效。为了保证申请者材料的真实性，商学院甚至要求申请者的每一份简历都有签字。所以申请者在准备自己的个人材料时一定要注意材料的真实性。
不要太短或太长。自荐信长短一般以1～2页为佳，太短了，无法表达清楚，而长篇大论，校方又厌于阅读。
留学申请时，推荐信的作用很重要，好的推荐信对申请人来说能够起到事半功倍的作用。在写推荐信时，必然会提及被推荐人的品性（Characters）。介绍每个人独特的个性用词也十分讲究，下列Characters是国外大学所欣赏的形容词，请各位读者参考。列举该类词汇的目的并非要各位将之奉为圭臬，而是希望在大家头痛脚痛浑身都痛的时候有个参考。请别忘了你的独特性，还请别忘了别人同你一样看过这个表格。
（1）Scholastic aptitude（学习方面的才能）
a． Native intellectual ability（天赋）
b． Imagination（想象力）
c． Creativity（创造力）
d． Capacity for analytical thinking（分析思考能力）
e． Intellectual curiosity; spirit of inquiry（好奇心）
f． Ability to work independently（独立学习工作的能力）g． Memory（记忆力）
h． Accuracy（准确性）
i． Methodology（研究方法）
j． Capability for abstract reasoning（抽象推理的能力）k． Potential as a researcher（研究的潜力）
1． Potential as a teacher（教学的潜力）
m． Ability to express his ideas orally and in writing（口头或文字的表达能力）
n． Capacity, desire and determination for good quality graduate
work（获得学业成功的能力、愿望与决心）
o． Probable success as a graduate student（作为研究生成功的可能性）
（2）Academic performance（学业上的表现）
a． Breadth of general knowledge（知识丰富）
b． Knowledge of literature in his field（本专业领域知识）
c． Grade or achievement（成绩或成就）
d． Industry, diligence（勤勉）
e． Participation in discussion（讨论积极）
f． Academic maturity（学业上的成熟）
（3）Languages（语言能力）
a． Ability to speak, understand, read and write the English language（听、说、读、写英文的能力）
b． Ability to read significant literature in other languages than English（英语以外的语言阅读能力）
（4）Character（品行）
a． Honesty; integrity（诚实）
b． Sincerity（诚恳）
c． Sense of responsibility（责任感）
d． Cooperation （合作）
e． Enthusiasm（热诚）
f． Conscientiousness（自觉性）
g． Ethical and moral standards（伦理与道德标准）
h． Reliability; dependability（可靠性）

你可以这样写：
英文自荐信范文(1)

Dear Sir or Madam:

My name is ****** , coming from Changchun of Jilin province . I will get English art bachelor’s degree smoothly in******university of Technology in July of next year.

Please consider my application for a qualified job hunter .Being an English major student to graduate soon , I’m longing for an opportunity to realize my personal value . You will note that I have acquired the professional knowledge of English and practical skills. Furthermore, I have won other prizes for my excellent performance. In the mean time, I enjoy many on-campus and off-campus activities.

Four-year hard-working and good education strengthens me and my social experiences cultivate my all-round ability, capable of communicating with high sense of responsibility. In my spare time, I widely dabbled a large amount of books, not only substantiated myself, but also have trained my technical ability in many aspects. All these make me have a big understanding of nowadays development of English. I can not say my study is excellent, but you know marks is not everything. Deeds speak louder than works. I’m confident that employing me is a kind of investment for you.

If you think that the record of mine qualified me for a start in your company. Please call ********. My references and I’m ready for your interview any time.

Your early reply will be very appreciated.

请你参考利用，祝你好运！

推荐信范例：

1.

Department of the SPECIAL CLASS GIFTED for YOUTHS
University of Science and Technology
Hefei, Anhui 230026, P.R. China
July 1, 1998

Dear Sir or Madam:

I take great pleasure in recommending Wang Yong, one of my favorite students, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.

Mr. Wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the SPECIAL CLASS for the GIFTED YOUTHS, my university's unique program that caters to the intellectual needs of unusually talented Chinese youngsters. It was a rare privilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through the years of his elementary and secondary school.

He impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle of china's scientific and technological talents. At the time, members of the Gifted Class all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles of calculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-study capability. Mr. Wang scored the highest grade in that exam. He also exhibited a keenly whetted mind during class discussions. To my regret at the time, his English was not as good as his mathematics or physics. But I noticed he made a point of working especially hard in improving his English during his five undergraduate years with us. By now, he seems to be at least as proficient in English as most of his former classmates in the Gifted Class.

In my experience with Mr. Wang, I was impressed with not only his extraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. I am sure that Mr. Wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program that he may care to enroll in. So I would like to support him firmly in his quest recommendation into account when considering his application. I would greatly appreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.

Yours sincerely
Fan Pu
Professor and Deputy Head

2.

Recommendation Letter

To whom it may concern,

As the Director of the Department of Computer Sciences of Wuhan University of Technology, which is one of the most prestigious engineering universities in China, I deem it a pleasure to recommend Mr. Nathan Wang, one of the outstanding students in our department for admission and assistantship you're your graduate program.

Since his enrollment into our department with remarkable entrance scores, Wang has embodied the fine character of strong inquisition and industriousness in learning, which has gained him significant academic success during his college years. I am aware of his distinctive academic performance as reflected in his transcripts. He maintains a very high GPA that places him in the top 5% out of 150 through the past 3 years, winning scholarships of the department almost every year. In the College English Speech Contest organized by the Teaching Committee of Hubei Province, he excelled most of other contestants, winning the first prize in the Region-wide preliminary contest, and the third prize in the final of the provincial level, being the sole participant representing our university.

I have also discovered him to be perseverant and enthusiastic in studies and extracurricular activities. During the Military Life Experiencing period, a compulsory training program for all Chinese college freshmen upon their immediate entrance, he was granted the title of Excellent Trainee thanks to his painstaking training efforts, though the training was extraordinarily rigorous and demanding. In the past college years, he has enthusiastically taken part in many students' societies, such as Computer Society, Road to American English and Literature Garden, etc, which has both seen his versatility and organizing ability by serving in quite a few positions.

Speaking of his organizing ability, I have to mention two well-known events under his active involvement and organization. One is the College Computer Festival of Hubei Province and the other is the Science and Culture Week of our school. In the first one, he was one of the chief representatives from our department to undertake this provincial level activity. His enthusiastic involvements in liaison, coordination and the contestants' performance evaluation had won him the honorable title of Active Organizing Participant specially granted by our department for this important occasion. In the second one of Science and Culture Week, organized in our school in 1999, he was a chief organizer. And it was so successful that it attracted more than one thousand students to participate, who were all satisfied with this event for the opportunity of a better understanding of the past and future of science in China.

As the Director, I am deeply impressed and moved by his capability of organizing and his sense of involvement, which have been explicitly demonstrated through all his participation in these activities

A bright young man, with blazing intelligence, energy, and determination, Mr. Wang deserves my first-rate recommendation. Thus, I would unqualifiedly recommend him for admission into the Ph. D. program at your university and I will appreciate your sincere assistance to his admission.

Sincerely yours,

这边还一些提示，也许对你有帮助：

申请英国大学时怎样写推荐信
To apply to British universities you need two references from your university teachers (plus one from your boss if the course requires job experience, eg MBA). The academic references should be in English and there are several points to remember:

(1) It must only include positive points about you BUT if it is too good it simply does not sound true or it sounds like your university is at a very low level. Too many references will say something like, 'this student is the best students I have ever taught' - and yet the students grades are just average.

It is supposed to be written by your professor and your professor should sound like a serious academic. Therefore claiming things like, 'I often enjoy discussions with this young man and he often amazes me with insights I had never thought of' - This is not believable, no serious professor would say this of his student.

(2) Be specific. Mention of the classes you have got the highest grades in should be made. For example, 'This student is gifted at Mathematics and he always grasped easily the Mathematical side of this subject, including advanced use of calculus and differentiation'.

(3) Make mention of your personality in class. The qualities UK professors are looking for are that your are lively, positive and proactive person, that you contribute to class discussions and like to speak your mind and ask questions in class.

(4) Be realistic. Lots of references mention things outside of class. It is not believable that your professor would know this.

看看这个网址，不错的，

个人陈述范例

My interest in science dates back to my early childhood. I have always excelled in physical sciences and have received numerous awards in mathematics in high school. At age 18, I attended Beijing Normal University, majoring in physics. Four years of extensive study on in physics and my current work in surface science inspire me to undertake a greater challenge in pursuing a doctorate degree in physics. My aspiration to be a research scientist also makes the graduate study an absolute necessity for me.
As an undergraduate student, I specialized in physics, mathematics, and computer science. And in my junior year study I studied computational physics in Applied mathematics III, during which I developed a 2-dmensional model with the finite size effect as a course project. in addition to being elated by my computer simulated phase transition phenomena, I was also pleased with the computed values of the critical exponents which closely agree with theoretical values. During the two-year course on the fundamentals of experimental physics, I diligently studied the techniques of operating experimental equipment, such as the epitaxy systems, lithography, and computer controlled data acquisition interfaces. I enjoyed these hand-on experiences. My current duty, as a research assistant, is to set up diamond film growth kinetics experiments which is designed to verify whether the mechanism of H atoms destroying C-H bonds in diamond film growth is the bottleneck reaction to diamond film formation. The results will give valuable insights and better enhance the research efforts of another group here. In the meantime, I am learning about the scanning probe microscopy, charged particle optics, energy analyzers and instruments used in surface science through the seminars held in my group.

In order to be knowledgeable in the breadth of physics, I have attended workshop and symposiums in different fields. In the symposium on Symmetries in Subatomic Physics held in 1995 in Beijing, I worked as an interpreter and edited the article "Conceptual Beginnings of Various Symmetries in the Twentieth century Physics" from Prof. C. N. Frank yang�s speech and translated it into Chinese. Not only did I keep an open mind to get experiences in academics, I also actively participated in extracurricular activities in my university years. In the senior year, I was a part-time teaching assistant grading exams and answering questions in the courses, A Journey to Subatomic World and From Quarks to Black Holes. I also had a part-time position as the bulletin board system administrator for the Physical Society of PRC. I am currently constructing their WWW home page to improve information exchange and science education in China.

Accumulating these valuable experiences, I am preparing myself for a career in scientific research. Being exposed to surface science, I am interested in mesoscopic systems and nanostructure materials. I plan to concentrate on condensed matter physics. Having carefully read the content of the graduate studies and on-going research programs at University of Washington at Seattle, I believe that UW is the best place for me to be. I am confident in that my diverse research experiences together with a firm commitment to physics have merited me to be qualified to undertake graduate study at the University of Washington at Seattle.

Applicant ****

mm/dd/yy

希望这些能对你有帮助，Good Luck~！

这个要自己写的
不一定写的有多好
写出自己水平就好了
切忌别找别人代写
英国人重视诚实甚至觉得诚实比学历和能力更重要
出国签证的时候英国大使馆有权利要求面签