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- 傅美政中美加国际留学咨询顾问,经济学硕士。亲身经历TOEFL、GMAT考试并取得高分,对留学申文书创作和名校申请有自己独特的心得体会。曾经被加拿大萨省大学金融学硕士项目(含奖学金)和加拿大渥太华大学经济学硕士项目录取。工作中善于发掘、提升学生个人背景中的亮点并加以整合,制作出可以全面展现学生综合素质的文书。现主要负责中美加国际语言课程培训、留学文案制作及留学签证工作。教授每天都能收到许多申请学生的邮件,尤其是申请助学金的。但可能教授连看都没看就删了你辛辛苦苦发的邮件。有这么邮件需要看,教授没有时间一一阅读并且回复。那些不能第一时间吸引眼球的邮件进而都进入了垃圾箱。所以,发邮件前先看看教授们怎样建议。教授们招学生也很实际,他们只对杰出的学生感兴趣,并且申请的学生一定要对教授所研究的领域有浓厚的兴趣,有过实验,有发表论文更好了。而且,拥有硕士学位申请成功的概率要高于本科申请者。 下面给出两封好坏邮件进行对比。 不好的邮件: Here are two sample letters: A sample letter that will never get the candidate an assistantship with me: Unwanted email Respected sir, I am very interested in going to the US for higher studies. I am seeking admission and financial assistance in your esteemed University. I am very interested in artificial intelligence and computer architecture. I have programming experience in C++, C and java. I am also familiar with several software packages in the Windows environment (MS Word, Excel Spreadsheet etc.). I also have networking certification from NOVELL. My GRE score is 2050, and I got 99 percentile in the TOEFL exam. I request you to spare a few moments from your precious time to go through my attached resume. Sir - if you are kind enough to offer me assistantship, I promise to work very hard for you. I have a very good academic record since primary school. Alternately, can you tell me what are my chances of getting assistantship from your department? Can you kindly inform me about the last dates for Summer term 2002 before which I can apply? Thank you for your valuable time, Yours obediently ABC My comments: I simply delete these emails, which I consider garbage .The person seems to be too obsequious and flattering. In the emails that I do read (occasionally), I do a first scan for keywords like "precious", "respected" etc. deleting the email if I find one. Obviously the person is not professional enough. The person is interested in artificial intelligence and computer architecture - these are quite unrelated areas, making me think that he is trying to cover as many professors as possible to get aid from any possible source. Besides, he does not have anything in support of his claim (about his interest in artificial intelligence). He emphasizes on his software skills, making me think that his goal is to get a programming job in the US and higher studies is only to allow him access to the US job market. His GRE scores are OK, but not exceptional. He asks me to tell him what his chances of getting an assistantship are, elsewhere in the department. I have absolutely no way of finding that out, and even if I knew, I would not bother to reply back. He also asks me to give him information about summer deadlines. How am I supposed to know that? (I would typically expect that this information should be available from the University web site, or from the grad school, but my guess is as good as yours.) Finally, this letter is too generic . He probably uses exactly the same format for hundreds of email letters to various professors throughout the country, leaving no stone uncovered. I receive hundreds of email like this. Regretfully, I cannot answer everyone, and these applications do not interest me at all. Now, here is a letter that would DEFINITELY attract my attention: 好的邮件应该这么写: Excellent email Dear Prof. Das, I am applying to KSU (amongst other places) for a Ph.D., and I am very interested in your research areas. I would like to explore the possibility of doing my research with you, with financial support. One possible area that would interest me a lot is in applying Tikhonov regularization to your problem in computational neuroscience, since I understand that neural data can be very noisy, and yet sparse.Alternately, I am also interested in applying evolutionary algorithms to your genetic neural network parameter estimation. One of my other interests in in parallel processing. Are you considering parallel implementations for any of your optimization/estimation algorithms? Considering that the projects that you list in your web site would probably be very computationally intensive, that may be a worthwhile strategy to pursue. I presented a paper entitled "Hybrid Gradient Descent Based Training of Probabilistic Recurrent Networks" in the International Conference on Neural Networks and Image Processing, Bangalore, last year. It is a reviewed publication. If have attached a copy of the article in pdf format. If you have available funds, and are interested in my application please let me know soon. XYZ My comments: This is a straightforward letter from someone with a genuine interest in my area . He is an exceptional candidate. He has evinced a keen desire to learn, and already has considerable mastery over my area of research . If I have any funding available, I would definitely try my very BEST to get this person . This person may have an MS degree, while many applicants have only a BS degree.相关连接:申请美国研究生如何选择教授和套磁美国研究生申请套磁为什么没有回复美国研究生套磁最好跟老师说什么内容中美加国际始终以名校
- 有的时候,套磁信对美国研究生申请起到的作用至关重要,而写好第一封套磁信无疑是良好开端,写好第一封套磁信应注意以下几点。 1、字数不要过多:不要超过两百字,最好一百字以内。因你于教授本不交熟,如写得过长,忙碌的教授可能不会仔细看。故第一封信以言简意赅为要。 2、附件勿带:邮件带附件或会被误...
- 一、美国博士套磁信——标题 写美国博士套磁信的时候很多人写的题目就直接是help,或者i want to participate to your program之类的,想申请美国博士留学写这样平庸的套磁信无疑是行不通的。美国博士申请套磁时可以把教授发的文章题目作为套磁信的题目,这样的话教授会注意下。至少教授会觉得你看...
- 有这么邮件需要看,教授没有时间一一阅读并且回复。那些不能第一时间吸引眼球的邮件进而都进入了垃圾箱。所以,发邮件前先看看教授们怎样建议。教授们招学生也很实际,他们只对杰出的学生感兴趣,并且申请的学生一定要对教授所研究的领域有浓厚的兴趣,有过实验,有发表论文更好了。而且,拥有硕士学位申请...
- 要想在美国留学申请中大获全胜,就要有效地与美国大学教授套磁,争取获得美国大学的专业全奖;对于一般的美国留学申请者来说,参考下面的专业套磁方式可以帮助自己获取意想不到的收获。1. 标题是什么---学术关联性单纯的写Hi 或是hello professor,或是help,I want to join you lab 只会被当成垃圾邮...
- 套磁信标题是申请美国研究生的学生在写作套磁信过程中比较重要的一个部分,一个好的套磁信标题也许就能吸引教授的注意力,达到成功套磁的目的。下面给大家讲讲套磁信标题的注意事项。1. 用对方的名字开头。你务必在邮件标题上加上对方的名字。这里尤其注意一点就是避免普发邮件,每封邮件都用同样的...