想去英国留学，该如何写一篇精彩的ps

1.在开始之前，校方要求申请者先去了解LSE开设的各个专业和项目，并且结合自己的兴趣和过往经历来确定自己对哪个领域有兴趣，在哪个方向有动力和优势。在PS的写作中，申请者应当展示出自己对所申请专业的兴趣和强势之处。
2.校方强烈建议你在PS中主要讨论你想申请的专业是什么，你为什么要申请这个专业。校方建议80%以上的内容应当是聊学术的，而不要编什么家庭悲惨故事，或者讲什么鸡汤励志啊什么的。
校方说你可以提到你经历过的活动，参加过的比赛等，但你写出来的经历应当和你要申请的专业比较贴合，能够证明你的能力或者动力。
所以，同学们，在申请这个专业之前，请先认真地浏览一下官方网站的细节介绍，看一看这个专业的课程设置。或者有条件的话，多搜一下该专业的宣传视频，所承办的活动视频等，全方位地了解，再结合自己的经历去写自己的个人陈述。
3.关于课外活动，LSE是这么规定的：
如果你要夸你体育啊，艺术啊，志愿者啊，学生会啊什么的，请不要让篇幅超过20%！
4.LSE还给出了一个错误PS示范，让大家规避。
"I have always dreamed of coming to LSE since I was young. It has been a dream of mine to study at this institution, which is well renowned for its social science courses.
I am currently studying History, English and Business and Management at Higher level and Italian, Maths and Chemistry at Standard level in the International Baccalaureate, and feel that these subjects are providing me with a solid background for university study.
I want to study History because I want to be a world class Historian, and feel that this degree will help me. I am especially interested in Ancient History, particularly the history concerning the Roman Empire. I am fascinated by the way in which the empire was run, and the events that led to its downfall.
"I was the captain of the school football team, and this has taught me the importance of working together as a team, and allowed me to prioritise my time between my studies and football practice. I feel that this has provided me with the experience to successfully balance my academic and social life, and I plan to continue this balance whilst at university.
It is my dream to become an alumnus of the School, and I am sure that as I am the top student of my class, you will offer me a place."
LSE给出以下点评：
1.申请者指出了自己对history有兴趣，但没有写明白自己做了什么努力，参加了什么活动，做了什么研究。
相反，申请者说了说自己在足球队很厉害，很显然，这对申请历史专业没什么用。
2.申请者特别提到了LSE是个好学校，但好像这并不能完全说明什么，还有点浪费纸。
3.申请者特别费劲地列举了自己学的所有IB课程名字，但很显然这些课程名字是可以在qualification界面里面查到的，申请者这是在浪费书写空间。PS的内容是应该陈述自己为什么选择意向专业，并且陈述自己的实力和动力的。